Proofreading

hello,

Let me "defend my actions". your figure of writing makes me feel a little alarmed...>>

I am the person who created the Domina Hailey page on september 3 from scratch. I wrote her history using my own words.from various resources and added adjectives and more words and etc. (on september 3rd)

since september 3 no one has added any new info regarding her history therefore I just corrected my own grammer to help the community. every little detail is still intact, I wrote it in shorter senstences.

I checked before editing,no other member contributed to the history other than me. so rest assured I didn't touch someone else's work.

pls look up the history of changes of the page. you can see my at the very bottom, and my original contribute.Check your concern one moretime carefully.

Also, why did you remove the video?? O.o the harlem quests line page has alot of official videos in it , what was wrong??

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Grammerly speaking, I will correct my misspelling in the future, thank you for informing me.

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